Tuesday, September 16, 2008

Twittering


Carly Wellham
Lead- "Go Green RecycAll program hits Towson." Good, short and precise lead.
Short Report- "Recycling will be made less confusing for Towson students with more labels on bins." Explains the who, what, and how in the short report.





Caitlin Moore
Lead- "Budget Cuts stops new hires." In active voice, and also very precise but leads me want to read the article.
Short Report- "As freezing process remains, Towson University plans to keep there options open, while looking for part time faculty members." Explains the who, what, where and begins on why the budget cuts are occurring.

Cara Flynn
Lead- "Towson football loses to Richmond." Her lead is in active voice but
also is a very simple one line lead into the story it is almost a headline but still can be a considered a lead.

Short Report- "The Tiger's 45-14 defeat, in Richmond Saturday afternoon, was due in part to four interceptions thrown by quartarback Sean Schaefer." This short report is one compound sentence which describes the 5w's. Her short report is very good and incorporates everything that is needed in a short report.






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